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Open Poetry #28

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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-08-13 10:51 PM

Why can't you love me
Why can't you just give me
One chance to win your love
But I guess I don't deserve
That one chance
And all i got was a shattered heart

Cold hands means a warm heart

eminor_angel
Member

since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

1 posted 2003-08-13 10:59 PM

aaaaw! this is so sad.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-08-13 11:04 PM

Julie, may you heart mend quickly. Yours is a smile that should never dim.

Loving hugs,
Linda

ShadowRaven
Member

since 2003-08-13

Posts 51

3 posted 2003-08-13 11:38 PM

This is very sad. It sounds as though you have a lot of love to give. Never lose that -it is a wonderful quality to have in the current world we live in.

Raven

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-08-14 02:50 AM

ouch

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2003-08-14 06:33 AM

It either happens or it doesn't happen....for you it will. No doubt whatsoever about that.

Hang on, Loner....and while you do that, keep writing pretty little nuggets like this. This one a library item for me.

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______________Ratleader______________

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

6 posted 2003-08-14 01:17 PM

well expressed feelings,,,

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