I'm Counting The Days Till You Come Home..

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Open Poetry #28

I'm Counting The Days Till You Come Home..

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-08-13 07:53 PM

i'm counting the days till you come home
till your in my arms again
because missing you is like a death sentence
it kills me
i'm counting the hours till you come home
because its starting to feel like you were never here
maybe it was all a dream
i'm counting the mintues till you come home
i'm starting to wonder if you'll ever come back to me
back to my arms
maybe it wasnt meant to be....
love is such a fragile thing
it can make you so happy,
your heart feels like it will explode
or it can make you so sad
you just cant live
i'm counting the seconds till you come home
because missing you is like a death sentecne
it kills me...

"so kiss me hard
cause this will be the last time
that i let you."
-D.C

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-08-13 09:48 PM

Wonderful! I enjoyed this. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
Emily Dickinson

Bec
Member

since 2001-02-23

Posts 475
Canberra

2 posted 2003-08-14 05:31 AM

Hi exhale...

I really enjoyed reading this. It made me remember what it feels like to be waiting for someone to come home, the anticipation, waiting to hear their car, and then the excitement to see them again!

Bec

"Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-09-03 04:33 PM

Sigh. The boards move SO fast...
truly enjoyed this...felt the anguish...

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

4 posted 2003-09-03 08:01 PM

I felt the longing and despair in this.What a reunion it will be when the arrival comes.

Crystal

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