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Pseudopsalm |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
Pseudopsalm I had the gift of wisdom Revered and held high My mind was a shining pearl Gleaming among the coal But now its lustre is dull My most prided part is gone Now they who take strength in my council have follied Those who trust in my wisdom are blind The empire has collapsed Has become but a small town To be raided and plundered By the cities it once ruled |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Eminor...now this poem... speaks so well... "I had..." I had the innocence... I had the truth.... I had the chance... ~*~ perhaps not where you wanted this poem to go? BUT... you did raise some good thoughts here.... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is very interesting. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"Those who trust in my wisdom are blind The empire has collapsed Has become but a small town To be raided and plundered By the cities it once ruled" Interesting would be the best word for it. Yes, yes..  |
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