Open Poetry #28 |
To My Angel ........repost |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
morning returns by the window and the day's first thoughts begin again with you, all in the same breath my heart becomes full and empty reflecting upon my love for you, by now i've come to know that you're the wind that i will never catch, the dazzling colors of the rainbow that dissolve as they are simultaneouly born, the snowflakes that disappear, while i try in vain to savor their beautiful taste upon my lips, by now i've come to know, that any validity given to us in the real world, could never parallel the storybook romance where you so lovingly let me write the story of us, by now i've come to know, that any man who fed my dreams, my heart, my soul, my imagination, over the last few years at a time when i so desperately needed this, is best treasured as the angel that saved me from falling off this ledge *** thanks again, R for catching me today ****** [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-13-2003 04:58 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very touching,,, |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Amazing writing so of course its down on the list with only one response.. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks Q raffi,,,,,,,,,,,youre the man, thanks for the bump |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*silent* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele . . . I adore this line the angel that saved me from falling off this ledge yes, many angels indeed . . . but maybe only one with wings of gold beautiful Michele xxoo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"that any man who fed my dreams, my heart, my soul, my imagination, over the last few years at a time when i so desperately needed this, is best treasured as the angel" I love how you have been writing lately... As for this: "at a time when i so desperately needed this"...I know all about that...oh yes..the need to still feel wanted, the need for comfort..support...acceptance...yes I know it. Susan |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Michele....speechless, silent, warmed, content. thank god or whoever for those people. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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