Open Poetry #28 |
Ladybug, Ladybug |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
+*+*+ Ladybug, Ladybug, you lie there so still, outside my window, on the edge of the sill. Your small wings are broken, you look rather ill, I'll mend them with cobwebs, and send you no bill. Dewdrops I'll gather, beyond yonder hill, where wee folks are singing, in sweet fairy trill. I'll mix you a potion, from crushed elfin pill, you'll come back to life with this spritely swill. I'll feed your sick tummy, with fresh garden dill, eat as much as you like, and nibble your fill. When feeling better, you'll fly to near mill, rejoining your friends, in mutual thrill. Alas, my dear Ladybug, If you remain ill, May I suggest, You make out your will? +*+*+ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (08-13-2003 06:49 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very cute write about a ladybug,, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Than-Q! EA |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Now there you go...I offered to read something I wrote to my daughter...of course, she passed. I offered to read to her a verse EA wrote...uh-huh...you guessed it! She loves you, EA. And this one is so cute and sweet...Ya Gotta Luv It! We are indeed an EA family! Patricia |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
they really are worthy arent they? of poetry |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Linda - when ladybug makes out that will, send it my way please. Lady bug, lady bug, fly away, I'll see you once again, another day... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Patricia ~ Your reply was so touching that I have saved it to my keepsake treasure folder of special replies and poems that I have received! Thank you! Sending Chelsea great big hugs!--and keep one for yourself--and for Macy as well! A family that reads poetry together, stays together! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Vandana ~ I'm glad you enjoyed it! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
inkedgoddess ~ Yes, they most definitely are worthy! Afterall, they are far more "lady" than "bug". EA |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Precious! Quite the imagination you have going there today my friend! hehehe Huggles and Giggles, Marti |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
What a delightful poem, Linda. It's so pretty. Hugs Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BC ~ Actually, Dear Bill, I was hoping that I could aid in her full recovery and therefore she would have no need to make out a will! However, if she takes an unexpected turn for the worse, I'll put a good word in for you! Huggums, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marti, I must admit, that I do have a very fertile imagination--and that has sometimes gotten me into hot water! lol Sweet dreams! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel, I am so pleased that you liked it! Have a pleasant sleep this fine summer's night! Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cute |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Linda you write in a fantasy way..like Beatrix Potter....i like the way you see the magical in nature...thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
A fabulous little kiddie thinggie gal...with a "Toerag" twist at the ending...this is superb little lady... Little Miss Muffet Sat on a tuffet Eating her curds and whey There came a big spider He sat down beside her She sprayed his ass with Raid. Mary had a little lamb But now the lamb is dead Now Mary takes the lamb to school Between two slabs of bread. The bee is such a busy soul He has no time for birth control That is why in times like these there are so many "Son's of B's" But your's is so much 'more' better... I liked this one gal...good write. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
EA, love the colour in this even if the colour is green. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
ps EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Goldenrose ~ Your highly complimentary reply lit up my face, this fine summer morning! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Toe ~ As you know, I absolutely adore writing songs and poetry for children! --Yes, the "Toerag" tango, I mean "twist" at the end! It seems you're rubbing off on me! Loves 'n hugs 'n smilie faces, Linda P.S. Your poems are incredibly cute--but of course they are!--when I consider the source! [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (08-14-2003 11:01 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kethry ~ Hi, Keth! Thanks for dropping by! EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... Here I was thinking that the ladybug couldn't have chosen a better caretaker... only to get the reality check at the end! LOL Enjoyed very much! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Suthern ~ You should know by now that you cannot tell an angel by the color of her wings! EA |
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