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My Inner Space |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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 Webshots Photo ~>o<~ There is something deep within me that is called my inner space That longs to be with you, my Love to look upon your face When the distance between us becomes to be all these miles The longing to see you, my sweet Love turns into the worse of trials From my eye is formed a tear to crystalize Then within my heart I suddenly come to realize No matter the distance between always here with me you will be If only I will but closely look you there I will surely see For the quiet of the night when I look up to a star I feel your presence in them nearby for near me you always are In the sunset I see with colors vibrant across the sky Within I can see our love with such beauty with joy I cry Or when a gentle wind blows by and brushes against the trees Right there I seem to hear your voice in soft whispers of a breeze Yes, no matter the distance between always here with me you will be If only I will but closely look you there I will surely see ~>o<~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (08-14-2003 09:10 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is so lovely Ethel. Beautiful pic too! What does your Gary think of your writing? I bet he is very proud. hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Chris. Gary loves my poems. He knows that all my love poems are written to him from my heart, and that makes him feel really good. He is my greatest encouragement. I tell him that I think he is kind of prejudice in my favor, though. LOL Thanks, my friend.  Hugs and love  Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel Mae, your poem was emotionally touching!---I swear I could detect the scent of roses as I read your words!   Linda Lou |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Always beautiful, always showing us your heart. I love that. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
expressed with true feelings,,, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yes, no matter the distance between always here with me you will be If only I will but closely look you there I will surely see How very lovely. *S* I like this very much! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You just brightened a wistful morning....and beautified my library. I needed exactly this, exactly now. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
When you look into yourself, what beauty comes from your pen! Very lovely indeed PIP hugs to you, dear Liz |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda, thank you.Even your replies are poetic, my friend. . . Mrghan, I'm glad that you love it. thanks. . . Glenn, thank you. Yep, I truly feel this way. . . Hugs to each one of you  Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ed, I'm glad that you like it and that it brightened your day. I appreciate you for putting my poem into your library, too. That's a compliment to me. . . Elizabeth, thank you so much. Your words always make me feel good....in your poetry and your replies. . . Hugs to both of you Ethel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
*goosebumps* your inner space, is very, very beautiful. keeping this you always remind me that true love exists.Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Ethel, this made me cry because it is so beautiful, sweet friend, I know just how your heart feels because I want so much to fill the space in my heart for my dream girl and make her heart flitter with comfort and joy! (kiss on cheek) Gary is so blessed to have you, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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