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Open Poetry #28

I Can't Love you

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-08-13 08:20 AM

You make me weak, in all the things you say.
I know that I can't love you,
But I'm tryin anyway.
I turn, not to listen,
Because your words make so much sense.
And I return to a day,
When what I said was what I meant.
But I can't love you now.
No matter what you say.
And I can't love you now,
Even though I wanted it that way.
You whisper to me quietly,
That everything's okay.
But I can't love you now.
no matter what you say.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2003-08-13 10:58 AM

Nice writing...James

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-08-14 03:59 AM

this hit home

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

3 posted 2003-08-14 05:32 AM

Very nice and delicate writing...thank you...
Goldenrose.

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2004-07-05 02:50 AM

thankx everyone for your lovely comments

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