Open Poetry #28 |
Is It Love? |
Lonely Shadow Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128Virginia |
What is going on inside Every time that you’re around I feel so nervous, I cannot speak Not a single word is found I lose myself so quickly now In those eyes so loving and true I don’t know what I feel inside Am I falling in love with you? But how can this be possible These feelings I can’t control They are not in my destiny Not of the guardian shadow When I see your smile so sweet Not a moment I want to miss And when I hold you in my arms I long for your gentle kiss I’ve only felt those lips just once During a moment of drunken bliss You asked for it and I delivered A short, yet tender kiss I would not make that moment last For I was terrified to lose This loving woman, my caring friend My inspiration, my muse So every moment passing by While I stand so close to you Your presence is felt so deep inside I don’t know what to do I dare not ruin what we have This friendship I adore But what if it were possible To make it something more But would you want to make it more Or am I only just a friend Would my advances in the name of love Bring our friendship to an end So I stand before you now For all the world to see With longing eyes, I ask the question “Could you ever love me?” Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how better for a romance to begin, but for friends....go with it asking nothing...with no expectations...let it compliment you and change you...and dream dream dream a very beautiful poem |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
The best loving relationships are built on a friendship first. Sounds like the love bug bit you good m'friend. ~Excellent write...Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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VBallNut Member
since 2003-02-12
Posts 60Virginia, USA |
Lonely Shadow - I am truly speechless. This was so wonderfully written - and these feelings are those that I've also felt. I'm in love with the one person who compliments me. We were friends long before we started dating and it only made our bond stronger. I've got my very best friend and soulmate right beside me everyday. Go with your feeling - you never know what could come of it. *smiles* |
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