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Tickled and Teasing
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Tickled and Teasing |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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I have counted the minutes watching the clock tic face down on my pillow before the sun comes into play fanning over the moonlight. Like an alarm that never goes off flashing green light hinting, that there is still time in a dream state, anticipating as a cat stretches and purrs. Curled up in the early morning embracing a soft touch warm against the summer sun parting between the blue and I all breezy, tickled and teasing~ ~*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there is still time very good write, very calming |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Goodness Bluesie, when did you find time to whip this out LOL, what a sweet gem this one was, and I love that time of the morning best where it teases. Nicely done! I don't want to know where I am going, it'll ruin my journey. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
You almost sent me back to bed to curl up again and wake up more gently  A great calming poem.peaceful.Jason |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
parting between the blue and I all breezy, tickled and teasing~ love the tease........ new photo , new attitude, very nice |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
mmhmm.. |
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minoune Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 87Canada |
you know.. i never thought of waking up slowly as tickle and teasing but i sure do like it... cause it is... lol Well put... minoune |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Nicely done -- I felt like I was right there, your imagery so clean that it brought out all the feeling of that in-between time. I like this very much, think I'll put it in my library. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, this is really pretty. I love it so much I'm keeping it, too.  Hey, I like your new picture, too. Hugs  Ethel |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - a nice tickle and tease to read this morning... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hey Bluesylady! Love the new pic! This is a sweet and uplifting write - enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ahhh... I like this very much! *S* Sounds like a MUCH better way to start the day than throwing the alarm clock and stumbling into the bathroom. *G* Excellent! *S* |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Curled up in the early morning embracing a soft touch warm against the summer sun parting between the blue and I all breezy, tickled and teasing~" Knew I shoulda slept in...  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This was understood in a very Bluesy way... Applause Kiddo. TD |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you for encouraging me, again and again! Many hugs all around you~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"all breezy, tickled and teasing~" ~ What a way to start the day!  EA |
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