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| Open Poetry #28 |
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To A Girl in Passing |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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Standing on the border, between sanity and hatred's twisted bliss where forgiveness and patience are left behind beside the sense of danger, where revenge is always sweet and acting out the most brutal fantasies of hedonistic retribution comes easily, and from the heart, I see you running out ahead of me, freshly bathed in urgency, prancing with a bitter smile naked in the icy winds of change. ©2003 by icebox |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sounds like a blustery day, for sure!! Liked this alot.... I see you running out ahead of me, freshly bathed in urgency Nice one, icebox~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Icy, God this was so good! There really aren't words to express.. "between sanity and hatred's twisted bliss" That line is my favorite. Another master piece my friend (Don't argue, this is my party). Hugs, Susan |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Imagery focused like a magnifying glass concentrating the sun's seething rays of burn... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I see you running out ahead of me, freshly bathed in urgency, prancing with a bitter smile naked in the icy winds of change. My goodness! What an awesome write! I really enjoyed this piece. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Standing on the border, between sanity and hatred's twisted bliss where forgiveness and patience are left behind beside the sense of danger, where revenge is always sweet and acting out the most brutal fantasies of hedonistic retribution comes easily, and from the heart, I see you running out ahead of me, freshly bathed in urgency, prancing with a bitter smile naked in the icy winds of change. I began to quote favourite lines from your poem then I realised I was quoting the whole poem. I love every single line. The imagery is fantastic. this is a  Maree fate is not just |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Grins oh i like this |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
scarey that I think I see myself in here somewhere.. and yet I contradict who I am and how I feel at the turn of every moment.. Enjoyed as usual Dear John, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
" see you running out ahead of me, freshly bathed in urgency, prancing with a bitter smile naked in the icy winds of change." You do know how to build an image, my friend...I love the texture of this one, and the 26,718 dimensions in it..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox Seeming contradictions make such visuals interesting and sharply focused. You are such a good writer! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
WOW!!  Loved the imagery here.angelblueyes |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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