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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-08-12 10:55 PM

i might have missed it -

if the ground didnt release my thoughts
from a maze of reruns,

if the sky didn't send back these feet
trying to escape its plight,

i might have missed it -

if this path didn't reverse its course midstream,

as for no apparant reason,
nearing termination of this season,

i might have missed the return of his blue,

is it fate then?

or am i just wishing for his rainbow too soon?

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-12-2003 11:00 PM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-08-12 11:02 PM

wish upon a star,, never a rainbow,,

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-08-12 11:25 PM

I've never tried wishing on a rainbow, Q..
Maybe it might work better than a star.

Great write, dahling..

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2003-08-13 01:21 AM

not quite sure what to say to this, and unfortunately I can't answer your questions, but

... it's a good write, thanks for the read

There's nothing like a good fight with a horse to put your problems into perspective

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-08-14 12:17 PM

Michele,

i might have missed it -

if this path didn't reverse its course midstream,

and why does it keep doing that?
*grumbles to self*

one day . . .
xxoo

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-09-15 01:05 AM

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-09-15 01:15 AM

Amazing work.. Sooo good!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2003-09-15 06:50 PM

Very nicely done Michele!

Susan

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-09-15 08:48 PM

you rule mishy

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2003-09-15 09:48 PM

wow, forgot about this, i really despise this poem
but thanks anyway responders

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2003-09-15 10:57 PM

Michele - rainbows are good to dream of, especially when ones reaches the end of one...

BC

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