Open Poetry #28 |
I Remember A Time |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Alan Ayers * * * I remember a time It seemed not so long ago When the pleasures of our love Would freely bloom and grow I remember how you held me Like there was no tomorrow I never thought there'd be a time When I'd be drowning in my sorrow I remember how you loved me With a burning deep desire We reached love's highest peak Beside the glow of the open fire I thought you'd be with me forever That with me you'd always stay I never entertained the notion That you'd take your love away But the blooms in our bouquet Have all shrivelled up and died You poisoned what we had With your cruel and bitter lies I was blind to the fact You didn't love me anymore But love will find me once again And come knocking on my door * * * I should point out that this was not written from personal experience. I am in motion |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This is a powerful, and strengthening write..Very inspiring. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I was blind to the fact You didn't love me anymore But love will find me once again And come knocking on my door Such optimism in this...words I needed this morning, Sue. Thanks! A great write! Patricia |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suetang Well done a good write, enjoyed. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - even though this is not from personal experience as you mentioned, it's written with the depth that it is. Nice write Sue... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I thought you'd be with me forever That with me you'd always stay I never entertained the notion That you'd take your love away This is so beautioful, even if it is sad. back for more exposure. Hugs Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is so very sad and I'm only glad it isn't related to you as you deserve true happiness forever, though sadly this is a case for many others! (sad sigh) This is a beautifully compassionate piece, sweet friend, you truly have the heart of an angel who only wants to help and comfort everyone, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
strong and powerful write! write on bella!! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Experience of yours or not, your poem is true-true-true for so many, and beautifully written. We don't always need to state fact, in order to say truth. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
First let me say, the picture? I want her dress... The poem? Totally understand what it says.. Susan |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice work, and it feels personal to me. That's the object of a good poem, I think. Sandra |
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