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Open Poetry #28

Sentiments Travel The Sea

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2003-08-12 12:28 PM

Sentiments Travel The Sea

You know that I miss you
Its been said many times
Within various greetings
Or my poems of rhymes

I pen my written thoughts
Wishing I could be there
With no need to ask why
I am sure you are aware

Endearing are the words
Heart to heart conveyed
Shared in loving feelings
As your songs serenade

Words keep me in touch
Voice mail speaks to me
Fondly written love notes
Sentiments travel the sea

Hope©2003

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-08-12 01:04 PM

lovely write.....I can relate

let it flow!

minoune
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 87
Canada

2 posted 2003-08-12 01:48 PM

I love the words you chose for your poem...
They ran smoothly in the midst of reading them... and it was obviouse the feelings portrayed... good write..

minoune

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-08-13 12:23 PM

Hope, I love your poems. This one was on the third page with only two replies (like a bunch of ours are), so I thought I'd send it back for another round. LOL

It's beautiful, as are all of yours are.

Hugs

Ethel

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2003-08-13 12:29 PM

Thank you poet friends for all your caring thoughtful replies ..... yes I guess we can all relate how emails often is the only way of keeping in touch

Hope

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2003-08-13 02:40 PM

where would we be without our words?
Lovely write Hope, I love reading your poems.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2003-08-14 02:43 AM

This is a perfect example of how many hearts get broken since the internet, and it is so sad. Well done Hope, and may the emails flow. (I love the things you send me too

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