Open Poetry #28 |
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Sunshine
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EverBend In radiant dance, her spinning of a rainbow down to buckets of gold doesn’t surprise me I swear, she talks to leaves just to hear them giggle in childlike wonder as flowers unfurl just to see if she is following their evolution she is eagerness of small fingers in stare of them to curl around her own she is a bear hug in hold of silvery filaments and other affairs a motion of poet is in her step and her smile she is the cradle at the foot of the mountain, a hammock of life that swings song into mystery one cascades deep into dark eyes hearing her mouth the sound of friend and knowing it is you she speaks to… but for all of this and more I cherish her, because I know she values me she is poet, she is friend she is Martie in ever-bend… ![]() [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-12-2003 04:53 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A beautiful tribute to a very special poet and friend. Absolutely wonderful Karilea... Martie will be so thrilled! ~Hugs & I'm out the door~ ![]() ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh my Karilea....this is a stunning and an absolutely beautiful tribute for our beautiful Martie. She's going to love it. Well done Sunshinygirl ![]() Maree. fate is not just |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Absolutely lovely tribute to a poet friend. So beautiful, K! Patricia |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You have captured Martie's beauty of soul very well dear Karilea......yes indeed. hugs for this, Chris ![]() "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"I swear, she talks to leaves just to hear them giggle in childlike wonder as flowers unfurl just to see if she is following their evolution" Wow, this write is one of your best! I'm saving this ![]() |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
nothing more fragrant than a touching tribute to a friend...beautiful! Rf |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
A beautiful tribute to a beautiful lady. angelblueyes |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks, everyone...this one evolved on its own while I was thinking on how Martie writes...and believe me, she's sort of like Bob Hope - one of a kind and never imitated! |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done..and a fitting tribute to a very fine poet... hats of to both of you..(chuckling) you for writing this..and Martie..well for being Martie... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a perfect tribute |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A beautiful poem for a beautiful lady....you captured an angel here, showed her as she is, and that is poetry enough. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Karilea, You are a wonderful person! And you can write to!! Love you lady! Susan |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is simply stunning, Sunshine... a beautiful tribute to a lovely lady. *S* |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, a very beautiful tribute to a very special poetess..... Nicely done KJ.. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely penned write,, |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea This is so very beautiful...and makes me feel very blessed to have a friend like you...thank you. My computer has had that nasty worm, so I didn't see this until now. You are wonderful, you know! ![]() |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, you're welcome, Martie...you don't know how much fun I had watching my hand write this... ![]() |
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