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Open Poetry #28

Green eyed monster

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-08-12 09:02 AM

this is a re-post of jelousy, i just started poting yeasterday and didnt know your only spose to posts three at a time sorry!

The green-eyed monster reared its ugly head.
I wish I could take back the angry words I've said.
Tears on my pillow as I lie in bed.
Thinking to myself, in my head.
When I saw you with that girl we both knew,
The green-eyed monster inside of me grew.
I didn't know what else to do.
So out of my mouth the words just flew.
My suspicions were wrong, I now can see
That I mean more to you than she.
Will you please accept my apology?
Do you think you could ever forgive me?
As I think back on our romance,
Will you please give us just one more chance?

minoune
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 87
Canada

1 posted 2003-08-12 09:19 AM

good wording my dear...could feel your pain...
Just try to remember to smile.. it will help you heal.

minoune

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-08-12 09:23 AM

angry words, jealousy and deceipt can kill any relationship, and it very difficult to recapture...although this person can forgive you...they may not wish to trust you again.
Good luck....

lilythumbs
New Member

since 2003-08-12

Posts 7

3 posted 2003-08-12 10:31 AM

i enjoyed this poem very much, thank - you

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2004-07-05 02:53 AM

thankx everyone for your lovely comments

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