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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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What art of light before Permits thorough prosperity One’s attention in green meadows Naked with bare feet Appearance of youthfulness successfully Anything gives way Sending words, birthing all forces The moon is ripe, and ever faithful Wild horses intertwine our souls Deep into the night where we forever meld There, dreams mean no effort and sail the powers rich Rising, rising to where sounds begin We find color, and plunge into surprise Renewal renovating desires May I please you, rejuvenate your every wish Throughout long days we’ll close any distance Sway with me now and travel towards ambition Though the burning breath of champagne and mystery Together we paint definition from the core of our being |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
wonderfully penned... enjoyed the chain of thoughts muchly... regards sudhir |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Thank you for your reply, this was written for my secret love...Kevin Costner....(SIGH) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Deep into the night where we forever meld There, dreams mean no effort and sail the powers rich Rising, rising to where sounds begin We find color, and plunge into surprise Renewal renovating desires May I please you, rejuvenate your every wish Throughout long days we’ll close any distance Sway with me now and travel towards ambition Though the burning breath of champagne and mystery Together we paint definition from the core of our being.. darn I wish I could have borrowed these words a while back...beautiful... ~sighing~ and going back to the dictionary...to learn a few new ones just in case....  M |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific write,,, |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
WOW, Lee.. This is great! I've missed you.  |
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