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Open Poetry #28

Questions And Queries

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2003-08-12 12:55 PM

Questions And Queries

A heart needs to know
It questions and queries
Embroiled in confusing
It bathes in the drearies

In desperately seeking
Heart swims the blues
Grasping for answers
Of criss crossing clues

Those guessing games
Crosswords to heart’s
Unanswered questions
Fragmented into parts

Lost without the signs
In need of explanation
Reaching for the clear
Heart awaits elevation

Arising to wholesome
The completion to say
Balance and harmony
Heart paths to convey

Strength of foundation
The heart needs to see
Togetherness is bound
When shared faithfully

Hope©2003

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-08-12 01:02 AM

Hope . . . and a fitting name indeed
for this write entirely

yes well said
xxoo

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-08-12 01:03 AM

"Lost without the signs
In need of explanation
Reaching for the clear
Heart awaits elevation"

Woah, lovely..

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-08-12 03:13 AM

sigh

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-08-13 02:40 AM

Balance and harmony
Heart paths to convey

Strength of foundation
The heart needs to see

I am so in tune with your keening, and I thoroughly enjoy everything that you write.

Hope~

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2003-08-13 07:44 AM

Oh Hope...this is just wonderful. You so spoke of my recent plight with this lovely verse. I hate plucking daisies at 2:00 am. Why can't love be crystal clear? And shouldn't it be?

Great write, Hope!

Patricia

minoune
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 87
Canada

6 posted 2003-08-13 07:54 AM

Words of wisdom here... and your right.. for without faith... what do we have...
Love the way you worded this , it just flowed...
really good post.

minoune...

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