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Sedentary Breath |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
~*~ Drawn in waxen pause Stillness fills in solitary cause The fog of disbelieving all but what A stationed heaving could so plainly put Coated humid in sensations chill Just a thread to pass the throat but will Swallowed in a moment out of chime Yet a sallow thinking…fainting time Drawn in thicker dew Swirling in the recessed hue Moist the still remembering of how Drawn in waxen pause the here and now Has the flat line won another round? Or is that the wind my cheek has found? Copyright Kkh 8/11/03 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (08-11-2003 11:15 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Has the flat line won another round? Or is that the wind my cheek has found? liked theese lines,, terrific write... |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
these are amazing lines: Just a thread to pass the throat but will Swallowed in a moment out of chime Yet a sallow thinking…fainting time nice sing songy rhythm to it . . . [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (08-12-2003 12:35 AM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful, Kathleen. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, sweet Lady.  Hugs  Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kathleen . . . I , too adore this entire stanza Coated humid in sensations chill Just a thread to pass the throat but will Swallowed in a moment out of chime Yet a sallow thinking…fainting time xxoo |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
YEAH! I love your writes! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
amazing |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is great  angelblueyes |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
each verse strong in feelings, you should stick around and post more often  M |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Kathleen, This is wonderful...your images are spectacular. Yes, I know this and often pray for the wind to touch my cheek if only for one moment bleak. Just lovely. Patricia |
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