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Smoke rings
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Smoke rings |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hold me just close enough to feel the heat of your intent I will allow your heart it’s every whim |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
O, dang! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just my heart?  yer smoldering, Dunc. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Damn ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Golly goob, you're making it hard for us gals to breathe you know. I loved the trail of your thoughts, and the warmth of your intent. Like a smoke ring day when the wind blows? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
The heat of intent... *breathes...awe...* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) Not bad at all for a slacker.... I'm surprised however, that you found the time to write something so sensitive and caring, with all the time and efort you put into keeping the facade of being a poech puppy. Good to read you Dunc... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Soooo.. Romantic, the style suits you well.  |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
short and sweet! loved this! Tequilia |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Is that an invitation?!?---Sounds good to me!   EA |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Whoah!...need to turn down the A/C, pronto. Patricia |
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