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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-08-11 07:28 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

So many times I've dreamed of love
Filled with passion and desire
Now as I fall in love with you
No safety net is required

When I look into your eyes
I see a future for us two
I kiss your lips so tenderly
As I lose myself in you

So let your love flow through me
Let it fill my inner being
Since you came into my life
There is so much love I'm seeing

You gave me wings to fly
Within my heart you've found a home
As I express my love for you
Via the words of this poem

* * *

"Love seeks one thing only,
the good of the one loved.
It leaves all the other secondary
effects to take care of themselves.
Love, therefore, is its own reward"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-08-11 07:37 PM


Oh so very very beautiful and truly romantic.
Much enjoyed the read tonight.
~Summertime Smiles, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

minoune
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2 posted 2003-08-11 08:00 PM


The way two people in love would feel is what you've written here.  Very good...

minoune

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3 posted 2003-08-11 11:26 PM


Sue:  Just a lovely poem and a treat to read!

Betty Lou Hebert

Goldenrose
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4 posted 2003-08-12 04:47 AM


Nicely flowing ryming poetry of love her Sue..thank you ..

Goldenrose.

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-08-12 05:32 AM


So let your love flow through me
Let it fill my inner being
Since you came into my life
There is so much love I'm seeing


Sue, exactly how my Love and I feel. Just
beautiful, my friend.  
Hugs  
Ethel


nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2003-08-12 07:57 AM


Beautifully felt Sue.  Your smiles of happiness come through your words.

*s
M

Patricia
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7 posted 2003-08-12 08:38 AM


This is perfect, Sue.  I hope someday to write about love in this lovely way.  

Sighs...this verse is wonderful!

Patricia

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8 posted 2003-08-12 09:23 AM


SueTang~
You write of love as beautifully as anything you do~
Wonderful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
9 posted 2003-08-12 02:28 PM


Fantastic and so romantic Sue.

Huggles, Marti

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10 posted 2003-09-20 04:11 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, and may love always give your heart wings and may you fly and each time you fall in love all over again you fall light as a feather! (kiss on cheek) This is precious, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2003-09-20 04:15 PM


I am a becoming a big fan of Alan Ayers paintings--and Suetang's poetry!


Linda

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