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Open Poetry #28

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Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2003-08-11 06:39 PM

I saw you for the first time while traveling
somewhere between box scores and day dreams
High above and looking down on the unaware,
like uninvited gods to snippets of time captured
and released as quickly as breathing in, breathing out
A mish-mash-montage of humanity disconnected
from an endless current of high-dwelling passerby's
Till our eyes met and for an instant we discovered
more than benign circumstance
I saw in you weariness and a last clinging hope
Within me, I felt you unravel something unrequited
From the gravity of your weary eyes I can bear it no more
and so, I look away

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-11 06:43 PM

*phew*

this one made me sweat..

great one..indeed..yessir..

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-08-12 10:11 AM

Within me, I felt you unravel something unrequited
From the gravity of your weary eyes I can bear it no more
and so, I look away

sighing at the truth in this...

M

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-08-12 10:13 AM

WOW! Amazing sightful write...very much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-08-13 01:52 AM

you are stronger than you know

look

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

5 posted 2003-08-13 01:54 AM

you have nice talent... will be watching

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