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Storm Passing
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Storm Passing |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
The July rain, pours down upon me Standing and staring, remembering As wet to my lips, release a fleeting taste’ Long ago this passed my way Today serves to remind me Tis only I that walks this road Deja Vu captures the moment To quick to dwell Like the shadows hidden behind my heart It dances in and out of view Comes out only when no one is looking Lost lunatics on silhouettes of a time Of songs re-written several times Along with letters, never to be sung…or sent Tomorrow awaits the night And like wet to rain I await…this storm to pass |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Many vivid images came through your words. A very powerful and well written piece of writing. Take care..........Sue I am in motion |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Thank you Sue for your warm comments. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
geez, you know how i love storms...  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Of songs re-written several times Along with letters, never to be sung…or sent Tomorrow awaits the night And like wet to rain I await…this storm to pass Very nice...wonderful images. Enjoyed. Patricia |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Thank you all for your kind words. |
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