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Of Fire and Roses (Duet with Aenimal)
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Of Fire and Roses (Duet with Aenimal) |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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Bitter seclusion, I want to set you afire. My eyes would flare with your reflection. Flicker, my lips pay no mind to being cast away etch my name upon your conscience why do you hold this rose in clenched fist blood and petals slip through fingers scattered in the wind oh, why we bend so sour red. sore hands have held your kiss, like peppermint. Swirled, our sins.. Still picking thorns from palms.. a garden of unanswered prayers. beneath the skin i buried deep your promise but nothing grows in frozen earth your distance frosts the seed of we And I..we.. trust not the fire that burns here, fault of water that falls from inside.. iced tears that we have cried, melting away.. I will hold your seclusion, as if it were not my own. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Wow! Cool, nicely threaded. Excellent work. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, so well done, the both of you. The meld...you each spoke as if you had inhabited each other's mind... Bravo! Brava! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This was superb! I was going to pick some favorite lines..but didn't want to accidentally play favorites...truly, I loved it all. Susan |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Fabulous blending! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow, what a weave!... fantastic both of you.. you work well together  this i'm keeping... Maree. fate is not just |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
awesome lines you guys . . . i buried deep your promise but nothing grows in frozen earth your distance frosts you write beautifully together xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks everybody Meg really carried this one she's great to work with and while i was critical of my own parts it all comes together really well hope to do more |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hope you do more too! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beneath the skin i buried deep your promise but nothing grows in frozen earth your distance frosts the seed of we very touching words... You write well together and maybe should do it more often *s M |
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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time |
I love each of your writing seperately, but it's ten times more powerful when done together. Bravo For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch, |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
MMMMMMMMMM 2 of my favorite poets...yummy...helen |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Excellent job you two!! There's nothing like a good fight with a horse to put your problems into perspective |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Beautiful combination- the words and the poets. Well done! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kaoru - you two write well together, this is excellent... BC |
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