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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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You carved shapeless marble in soul design built no cathedrals -- {I think of her hands, such quiet hands--mostly when the sun fades how, with faith, I climbed many heights lost, alone silence became a true friend} Somewhere upon the restless sea riches of earth passed me by -- I longed for hours of quietness when I would know tranquility {Strange how fingers of memories hold small things -- lamplight fireflies you} but it's time I-- Smooth the folds, lay the veil in starlight, your fragrance still haunting my threads of life {I am so thankful} Kneel a moment, where sunlight casts its gold upon the ground Fades leaves fell among her roses -- These tears, I now understand The way you move me |
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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time |
Oh my god, that was just beautiful.  For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch, |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This was amazingly beautiful angelblueyes |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sending love and prayers ... ALWAYS - me |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
"These tears, I now understand" and perhaps now so do I.... beautiful as always... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sometimes I go prospecting for things I've missed -- it seems that the best things tend to fall through unnoticed. Like this one almost did. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me cry as it is soooooo lovely and reminded me of autumn in particular with the golden leaves being indications of fleeting moments! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
but it's time I-- Smooth the folds, lay the veil in starlight, your fragrance still haunting my threads of life {I am so thankful} Kneel a moment, where sunlight casts its gold upon the ground Fades leaves fell among her roses -- These tears, I now understand ========================== Oh my Lauren ........ Smooth the folds, lay the veil in starlight, your fragrance still haunting my threads of life {I am so thankful} Kneel a moment, where sunlight casts its gold upon the ground *whispering* oh Lauren.......... "If you see lonely, clear skies turning stormy ... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
.....how, with faith, I climbed many heights lost, alone silence became a true friend} ~*~ How I understand this... Thank you, Lauren. True grace, and beauty... |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
I'm falling in line behind Ed...this is truly inspired! Rf |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Anyone for a round of BUMPer pool? |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
riches of earth passed me by -- I longed for hours of quietness when I would know tranquility {Strange how fingers of memories hold small things -- lamplight fireflies you} Lauren, have I ever told you how much I love your writing? Well, I sure do, sweet lady...I sure do!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Very lovely, there is an awe and humbleness in your writing. It seems in loneliness we find ourselves and appreciate those finer gifts. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I love this!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Somewhere upon the restless sea riches of earth passed me by -- I longed for hours of quietness when I would know tranquility {Strange how fingers of memories hold small things -- lamplight fireflies you} ================ "If you see lonely, clear skies turning stormy ... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Touching my heart.. Sandra |
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