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When We Meet Again (nakdthoughts & Bill Charles)
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When We Meet Again (nakdthoughts & Bill Charles) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“WHEN WE MEET AGAIN” by nakdthoughts & Bill Charles ~~~~ I should have seen the writing on the wall, and polished all those words with softened smiles. For now the seasons pass and distance calls, so far away you are that words must travel miles… Remembering the sweet tones of your voice, the melody that melted heart of mine. No promises, just loving words of choice, setting forth the future in design… That autumn, lovely was the day, you came into the light and touched me brief. But lasting ever after, words in play, that stole a kiss of real, a lover's thief… ~~~~~~~~~~ Perhaps I should have known the first time, when we met then and hearts beat together, that I would not be near your side to know, if this chance were lost, for it does simmer… Words were spoken then with a nervous heart, your eyes sparkled and I knew not what to say, a smile was one from a woman that charmed, and I wondered what could have been that day… Softness reigned when the leaves turned to gold, and tender warm whispers flowed from within, the memories linger on for more is to be said, for night lover’s we will be when we meet again… ~~~~ [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (08-11-2003 12:28 PM).] |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
WOW!!!!!This was amazing.Tender, hearfelt, longing,and romantic  Bravo to you both.angelblueyes |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I enjoyed this very much... congrats to both poets! *S* |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Nicely done! Susan |
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minoune Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 87Canada |
*sigh*..... bravo Bill..... i could really feel the longing... minoune |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoy reading your words separately--and together as well! Lovely write, M & BC!   & EA |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Softness reigned when the leaves turned to gold, and tender warm whispers flowed from within, the memories linger on for more is to be said, for night lover’s we will be when we meet again… love the golden touch, lovely combination of poetic finery |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Luscious in word and thought...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
you make good poetry together! Rf |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
beautiful blending of seasons here you guys . . . I cannot tell where one ends and the other begins . . . which means it is perfect! *smile* xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful duet here you two! Lovely blending of ink and...spirits. Very much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Softness reigned when the leaves turned to gold, and tender warm whispers flowed from within, the memories linger on for more is to be said, for night lover’s we will be when we meet again… Well, you brought tears to my eyes with this verse. If you wouldn't mind...may I keep this one for it brings to mind a cherished memory? Patricia |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a great duet you two have written here...enjoyed the romance and magic of the flow. Bravo! TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oooooo, I'm in awe! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Softness reigned when the leaves turned to gold, and tender warm whispers flowed from within, the memories linger on for more is to be said, for night lover’s we will be when we meet again… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It's all good, but this really topped it off. Enjoyed. Deb |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Bill, for taking the time to share our thoughts. It's always a pleasure to write with you. Time does do strange things to the mind, but I will always remember the time we spent together, short as it was...and hope it won't be the last.  M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (08-12-2003 07:39 AM).] |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Nice job, you two... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WynterGal & BillCharles~ As elegantly phrased as these lovely memories are ... encore please~ Next time ... in closer proximity~  Beautiful you two~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
heart to heart and friend to friend you two both write , with a loving blend Hope |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
To all - I want to thank everyone for the replies to this writing. It is a pleasure to write with Renee, and my thanks to her for letting me do so. Thank you Renee... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You are welcome Bill, not sure if many know me by Renee...but it's always fun writing romance with you, since you do that so well. Thanks again to all, especially you, Bill. M |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Verses fitting together so well remind me of spoons. Nicely done!! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
What a Duo! Great poem,lovely lines. |
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