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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-02 10:38 PM

Haunting whispers,
psychic rain.
Forward eyes I
had a vision.

I was once a fish
inhaling sand.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-08-02 10:48 PM

goddamn...yah..that sums it

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

2 posted 2003-08-02 11:50 PM

Nice one!

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

3 posted 2003-08-03 01:22 AM

Gritty . . .

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-08-03 07:21 AM

i was once a fish, now i am breathing with the trees.......

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2003-08-12 11:26 PM

This is different...I like.
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

6 posted 2003-08-13 12:14 PM

I like this a lot.

It took my thoughts away and put me somewhere else; how it did that, I don't know.

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

7 posted 2003-08-13 01:13 AM

I love the wording you used in this!!

There's nothing like a good fight with a horse to put your problems into perspective

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-08-13 06:44 AM

the fish is in the sand
and the sand is in the fish
its all so simple, why don't more people get it?

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2003-08-13 09:29 AM

Suffocating...uh huh.

Loved it!

Susan

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-08-13 12:42 PM

awesome!

gave me chills

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2003-08-13 01:07 PM

another thought to ponder...good one...i liked

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

12 posted 2003-08-13 01:22 PM

Been there, did that.....choked for a while, then learned that I could be a grunion....

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______________Ratleader______________

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

13 posted 2003-08-13 04:28 PM

about tht ecomment you left me on my poem, i always thought that if we are someones dream then everytime they woke up we one of us died, and everytime they fell alseep they created a new dream lol i know i know i'm weird lol.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

14 posted 2003-08-13 04:55 PM

fabulously penned,,,

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

15 posted 2003-08-13 07:11 PM

enjoyed

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

16 posted 2003-08-13 08:50 PM

...I guess there are worse things to inhale...
A jarring image though.

-MVS

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