Open Poetry #28 |
I'm Sorry... |
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
it's over the words escape my mouth i feel the sting of regret you stop moving stop breathing i can see the pain in your eyes i'm sorry i never meant it your mine always i would never hurt you but i know i did i wish i could take them back but i can't whats done is done i've already left i wish it didnt have to be like this i wish everything could be like it was 10 years ago but i'm not who i was then and neither are you we grew apart and no matter how hard we try it will never be the same i'm sorry... "when everything feels like the movies, |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
this is so sad!! man, the memories. you do an excellent job of bringing them back up. thank you for the tears, sometimes we need them. |
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Lexia Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111Nowhere |
This is so sad. Great job displaying the emotions. Lex You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes you gotta be logical instead of emotional |
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minoune Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 87Canada |
This is a poem many people can relate to. As we grow, we change, not because we choose to, it just happens and in ways we have no control over. You can fall out of love... just as you can fall in love.... its not meant to hurt, or to happen, but it does and we have to follow our hearts.... I really connected with this... wonderful post.. minoune |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Hi exhale... I know what that's like! You've captured the pain and regret, but ultimately we soldier on! Great write. Bec "Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Get out of my marriage! great write. Jason |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Yep..minus a couple of additions and there you go! My marriage as well... Excellent writing. Susan |
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