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eminor_angel
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since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

0 posted 2003-08-10 06:46 PM

i don't breathe
i gasp
when you enter with the
the olive branch already trampled
underfoot of your
steel-toed boots
that found home in my
ribcage and
the day your ears became
resistant
to my screams
i knew i was
wife, prey, victim
recipiant of abuse
whatever synonym you choose they all mean
hunted

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Gabriel Frost
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since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

1 posted 2003-08-10 07:04 PM

Stunning!
I dont even know what to say...

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

2 posted 2003-08-10 07:29 PM

I hope that you are far, far away from this.
Painful but well written.

Jason

Third Libra
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

3 posted 2003-08-10 07:58 PM

Painful, sad, and well put. Good stuff.

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

Match
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since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

4 posted 2003-08-10 08:06 PM

"whatever synonym you choose they all mean
hunted"
I liked this line the most, This poem is filled with emmotion and pain, it makes me think of all the people out there who are "hunted" as you say. I liked this poem immensily!

-ash

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair

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Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2003-08-10 08:37 PM

Oh, my goodness. I don't know what else to say as this write has taken me aback. Very intense and well written. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
Emily Dickinson

exhale
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since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

6 posted 2003-08-10 10:13 PM

that was, without a doubt, incredible! you have an amazing gift, never ever forget that

Ankaria
Junior Member

since 2003-07-26

Posts 35
Sask. Canada

7 posted 2003-08-10 11:20 PM

Hey, I'm the saskatchewanian you wanted to message you! I'm from S'toon too. hehe, Imagine that.

Ankaria
"Is all we see or seem, but a dream within a dream?"
-Edgar Allen Poe

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Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-08-10 11:24 PM

Oh Goodness, this hurts. I hope that this isn't
still going on.

Hugs to you

Ethel

Poe_Pot_Pie
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 107
Canada

9 posted 2003-08-11 03:55 PM

Very nice. I hope this is not your story! I enjoyed, this is one of your finest!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-08-11 06:41 PM

Oh Jesus . . .
angel this one amazing piece,
I must say you floored me
and the content?
I am sorry . . .
but this is one awesome write
xxoo

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

11 posted 2003-08-11 07:06 PM

I hope you only need words for protection - - and please find more, if you need.

Rf

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2003-08-11 07:13 PM

You knew that you were a recepient of abuse...he should know what the inside of a jail cell looks like and he should know that you are gone...James

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