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The Navigate |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The Navigate As if in tempest, swells ascend These seas rise up to meet the wind Enfold and hold this hurricane That only you can soothe again Breezing rain clouds with the sun Darkness with the bursting dawn There is no rage inside this storm Ambivalence or hidden harm A reasonable assessment where Is only found of show and share How well you navigate depths fair When only you, will do…or dare As under moon’s control and please You hold within your arms full seas There storms arise and lay to calm In quiet drops within your palm And where there be related state Watermarks articulate Rivers run in currents bold Streams to seas of her I’m told In clues as whirlpools circulate Then man, how well you navigate Copyright Kkh 8/10/03 |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
In clues as whirlpools circulate Then man, how well you navigate wow what a fabulous write,,, |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Splendid indeed, the magic of the sea  woderful theme , water is the key to life wolf |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
As under moon’s control and please You hold within your arms full seas There storms arise and lay to calm In quiet drops within your palm Just lovely!! Enjoyed this!! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"As if in tempest, swells ascend These seas rise up to meet the wind Enfold and hold this hurricane That only you can soothe again" ~ a wonderful first stanza that sets up the remainder of this remarkable poem.   EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
As under moon’s control and please You hold within your arms full seas There storms arise and lay to calm In quiet drops within your palm Kathleen, this is so pretty.... all of the poem is. I really enjoyed resading it.  Hugs Ethel |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"As under moon’s control and please You hold within your arms full seas There storms arise and lay to calm In quiet drops within your palm And where there be related state Watermarks articulate Rivers run in currents bold Streams to seas of her I’m told" You have written something tremendous here.. I'm putting it in my library. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
TD, This is an amazing verse...With each read (and there were several) I extracted something new. A marvelous write! Patricia |
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minoune Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 87Canada |
all i can say is... *wow*... minoune.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kathleen...this entire piece just took my breath away. Beautiful...I am speechless! ~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you everyone...your kind remarks have left me speechless. Think fondly of all of you...and this beautiful place. TD |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A true navigator never gets use to the storms, Kathleen - because if that were to happen, the next one would take him under... Well done! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I was going to pick my favorite lines...but dang they are all so good I can't... I really loved this. Susan |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You write so beautifully delicate--truly a class act, TD. And the final line left me smiling. |
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