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A Broken Love
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A Broken Love |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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i remember every word you said to me all the harsh words spoken i remember the tears rolling down your cheeks i didnt care you hurt me you deserved to cry you deserved to feel my pain i remember you pleeding with me telling me i'm your one and only i wouldnt listen to you i couldnt to blinded by the pain i remember your eyes staring into mine without even saying a word you had broken me you tore my soul in half did i deserve what you did to me? did i deserve to feel that way? i remember looking for my coat and finding my keys i remember leaving, with you screaming after me i remember every word you said to me and i remember driving away from them... "when everything feels like the movies, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lots of emotion here...James |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
heartbreak hotel baby , the end is always the hardest to get over , the ability to see past the past and to start living in the present , therefor creating what you want as your future wolfy |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
i remember looking for my coat and finding my keys i remember leaving, with you screaming after me i remember every word you said to me and i remember driving away from them... Strange....but I remember too. Well done. Chris  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Chelsea . . . I know . . . amazing writing, friend xxoo |
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