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Lost Dreams |
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symphony_of_thoughts Member
since 2003-08-03
Posts 95Somewhere |
Lost images stuck in my mind Searching for something Lost images are hard to find Ending up with nothing I yawn and tire As I lay down in bed Thinking of that far off desire As I rest my weary head My worries have passed As I slowly close my eyes They'll never last I say, letting out my sighs As I drift into the unknown I lose touch and just fall My surroundings unshown As my mind begins to crawl I'm in a lost world Where my thoughts play through Head first I was hurled Stuck here like a puddle of glue It's like a Dr. Seus Book Showing something strange and unthought I better walk around and take a look For something which I must have surely sought As I finally awake, from an unknown shake I stare up to the ceiling Thinking of dreams I wish to take But in the end, lost memories start peeling You try to grasp them But you can't catch Like a perfect, shiney gem Nothing else will match Lost images stuck in my mind Searching for something Lost images are hard to find Ending up with nothing |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This is very true, we often search for and cannot find a way to relive the past and the feelings attached to an experience. Good poem, however the rhyme sounds a bit forced. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
written with knowledge .. the dream warrior i really like the way you can ryme , great one , wolf |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
So true... |
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