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Migration |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Is there ~nothing~ more to this feeling migration of emotion ~here~ to there and back again without the seasons crossing the river one in a million of bodies trampling bones fragile fighting for greener pastures grazed skins I do not make it to ~graze~ upon the green simply stuck in between . . . Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
A very interesting read, I just loved the imagery that you employed. Thanks for sharing it with us  Andy |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sounds like you are stuck...perhaps you need some transmigration. Lovely images. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
captivating , i am gonna have to read this one again ... your pen flows with energy wolf |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
That urge for better inspires change, i too feel that longing for something..searching.. Nicely expressed! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This so reminded me of something I've been meaning to write about--the "vee" formation of flocks in migrating flight--how the strongest bird takes the lead, and the others follow that break in the wind for the sake of velocity... smile? Enjoyed this much gemma. Hugging you. For somebody who is always admiring the brainpower of others--yer not so bad yerself.   |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very good penning of thoughts,,, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
stuck but for a time then off to a new adventure . . . then back again yes, I know . . . seems never-ending this cycle of insanity Each day resembles the last . . . xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I do not make it to ~graze~ upon the green simply stuck in between you know i feel this through and through gem..hugs |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I suppose not... that's all there is...  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"crossing the river one in a million of bodies trampling bones fragile" Oh my..this was fantastic! One in a million..yep. Susan |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I do not make it to ~graze~ upon the green simply stuck in between" It sort of sounds like being in the bardo state, as I understand it. ~ May you graze upon the green and be treated like a queen!  LL |
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