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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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Uncovered naked to name a few words a few words to explain to explain how i feel when i'm around you around you my world moves moves like my body to the music music of my heart my heart that longs for you for you i would die i would die just to hear you to hear you is bliss bliss is what i dont deserve.... "when everything feels like the movies, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
pssssssssssst... take a chance... and just let yourself enjoy ANYWAY. oh-I-could-relate-to-this. smiles and hugs. |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
this is excellent. is there a name for this type of poem, with the last word starting the next line, or did you create it? btw, I love your username 'exhale'. very cool. |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Lovely write here. it's one of those enter at your own risk situatuions. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
well i think you have a good chance at this one , the cards were played in your favor wolfy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very good one...enjoyed |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
lovely! |
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