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in the fields......(inspired by the Sirens' song)
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in the fields......(inspired by the Sirens' song) |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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run away little darlin run away little darlin the dark fingers dance in the white picket fence gotta leave your name in the fields run faster little darlin run faster little darlin for the tall meadow grass is gonna catch your dress and leave you sleeping in the fields run farther little darlin run farther little darlin 'cause it's hard to breathe in the shadow of the trees gotta leave them swaying in the fields run river little darlin run river little darlin you can drown your scream where the water flows clean and leave the sun empty in the fields |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Damn Brian! I love the flavor of this... Yes, I can hear it. what are we gonna do at work next? |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You had me dancing in the fields, swaying in the wind. I especially liked how the sun emptied into them. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful! Simply beautiful! ~Summertime Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I loved this.The music, the field, the sun.Lots of things can happen here  Nnicely done.angelblueyes |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God, the both of you here . . . Bri, this too has touched me deeply like you will never know . . . Is beautiful . . . I know her . . . xxoo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
OH my... you are a musician Bri... this IS beautiful, but am I the only one who sensed some panic in this'n? A child trying to make it home before dark? (egads do I know the feeling, but with ME it's sun-up!  )This is truly beautiful Bri.  and I happen to know a pretty good blues band who lets ANYBODY sit it in, too. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Brian, I'm glad you wre inspired, too...this is beautiful. And, here....... run away little darlin run away little darlin the dark fingers dance in the white picket fence gotta leave your name in the fields Every woman needs to "leave her name in the fields"...  Hugs  Ethel |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Wonderful images in this... In fact, both you and Ed have inspired me! ~Tier |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I could hear the music in this, brian....and a nameless fear. Very atmospheric. [This message has been edited by Martie (08-10-2003 01:34 PM).] |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ooops  [This message has been edited by Martie (08-10-2003 01:35 PM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh...this is just beautiful, Brian...a musician, indeed. This begs to be read over and over again...I love it. Hugs to you, friend... "My friends are my estate." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awe |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know I could almost see a Grandfather with a young child on his knee while he sang this song of warning to her. I absolutely loved the image this gave to me, and yes Karen, I also saw a child running to make it somewhere, and now as you filled in the blanks, perhaps it was home. Fabulous I saved it.  |
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