Open Poetry #28 |
Golden Summer Of Love |
Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Sitting on an old log, I watch the scarlet poppys dance among the corn, Like spilled blood on the battlefield, Raising my sight above the corn, I spy a speck break the horizon, like sun shining off a shield, Feelings wash over me, as I watch the speck gradualy grow larger, Heart unexplicably beating faster, my eyes are glued to the form of the figure, Coming into view is the heavenly aspect of thy face, I can feel my heart in my throat, Wearing a floral summer dress, my eyes on you feast, Softly kissing me, you push me to the ground and lay ontop of my body, your passion is like that of a wild beast, After our love, you smile so beautifuly, as you pick and blow the chaff from an ear of corn. I love you so much, my cherrished sweet queen, With you I am reborn...! [This message has been edited by Goldenrose (08-10-2003 11:46 PM).] |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
lucky you when i lay in fields i get stung arthur |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
i remember a day when my heart felt a passion , she awaits on a thrown of jade , in my dreams we meet wolf |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you for this beautiful, heartfelt poem..that was written especially for me...I have the original, handwritten version! I love you so much, my cherrished sweet queen, With you I am reborn...! my favorite line! XXX Love~ARH [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (08-10-2003 11:45 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I feel like I "write" in the middle of a beautiful love story between you and the lovely ARH. Your new photo is very charming, sweet prince of ARH! Have you ever thought of writing a romance novel, Dear Rose of Gold? EA |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Thank you for the kind words for my poem... ARH it would not have been written without my love for you....thank you for being there for me....love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxx Earth Angel..no i have never thaught of writing a romance novel..writing poetry taxes my brain enough...although i could write a book in the future...who knows?..thanks for the kind words..Goldenrose. [This message has been edited by Goldenrose (08-11-2003 04:47 AM).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my...how gorgeous! yes, very special indeed! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Thank you for your kind words Dixie...they do inspire me to write more.. Goldenrose. |
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