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Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2003-08-09 07:42 PM

Complete focus.
I must ask you just right
or you won't respond.
I must be firm yet gentle
knowing that you want to listen
and are waiting for me to let you
teach me how to teach you.
The stresses fade away;
I lose myself in your eyes.
I touch your face and you pull away
so I touch you again and you let me.
I scratch your ear and you nuzzle my hand
looking for the elusive treat
that means a job well done.
I throw my arms around your neck
and cry.
You stand there and let my human emotions
drain away into your fur
so that once again I may be
what you think I really am;
your herd leader, your lead mare.
Equine personified.

**Equine: Of, relating to, or characteristic of a horse. -dictionary.com

There's nothing as unbreakable as the bond between an Arabian and her person

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-08-09 07:44 PM

Skyfire - lovely and tender write...

BC

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-08-09 07:48 PM

Perfectly beautiful..
Fantastic imagery..very much enjoyed!
~Summertime hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

3 posted 2003-08-10 10:10 AM

Wonderful writing Rhonda, I really enjoyed the read

Andy

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-08-10 01:50 PM

Rhonda, this is beautiful and tender. It's so
sweet. I'm sending it back up for another round.

Hugs

Ethel

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2003-08-16 01:27 AM

Rhonda...you should write about your equine
friends more often. I enjoyed this.
Hugs,
~Mum
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

6 posted 2003-08-16 09:21 PM

I'd give you great big bugs, but I'm sick.... besides, I'm not sure I can walk that far when I'm healthy, never mind dizzy and weak as a newborn....

(I hate being sick).

Ah, what the hey. *BUGS* You write beautifully. When my head is back to normal I'll re-read and tell you how truly good it is.... for now I'm so muddled that I can't even think in circles. Not that I manage straight lines very well at the best of times.

You just continue to stun me woman and something in my muddled head says I'm rambling. Signing off.

Kielo

(You have no idea how long it took to get the typoes out of this....

)

[This message has been edited by Kielo (08-16-2003 09:22 PM).]

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2003-08-16 10:56 PM

You feel like a horse, you think like a horse, but you certainly don't look like a horse! To me you are a beautiful young woman who is an equine empath!

EA

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

8 posted 2003-08-19 08:30 AM

Your love of this animal shines beautiful.

A different style from you here rhonda, and as always i love it.

he/she needs you, you needher/him.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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