Open Poetry #28 |
We are the dead. |
Ankaria Junior Member
since 2003-07-26
Posts 35Sask. Canada |
We slowly moan away No longer lingering- We hear what you say. We are the dead We are gone but we still sing- Rest your tired head. We lived the long journey A thousand memories upon your smile- We are Not returning. Hear us smile, hear us sing It will be your last time- You will see wonderful things. We are the dead We are gone but we still sing- Rest your tired head... Ankaria |
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Ankaria Junior Member
since 2003-07-26
Posts 35Sask. Canada |
Thanks for the input everyone.. |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
well i liked it at least! shucks, it was haunting but damn realistic! |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
well i liked it at least! shucks, it was haunting but damn realistic! |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
behind all the darkness lay a hidden chamber of secrets ... that only the dead behold .. wolf |
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Third Libra Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 125South Carolina |
I liked this one a lot (of course that may be because it is one of my obsessions). Good stuff. Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear. |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
yahoo! another Saskatchewanite! I'm from Saskatoon, myself. Please drop me a comment or something to tell me where you live. haunting poem, very good. |
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Ankaria Junior Member
since 2003-07-26
Posts 35Sask. Canada |
Ahh it's good to see another saskatooner. How can I message you? Ankaria |
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