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My Well Worn Shoe
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My Well Worn Shoe |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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My Well Worn Shoe It’s the same old story Fits like a well worn shoe Caught deep within the pain Beyond caring, just loving you There’s little thought Of right and wrong When a mind is transfixed By loves sweet song You know I hear your call For just one true friend But I’m not the sapling Hearts break, not bend And so I give my life To try and be true But this love won’t die There’s just no one but you! Yes I know I shouldn’t Yet still I have my say And wonder of the cost That I’ll come to pay If it be my fate Then let me be blue But please don’t doubt This love I hold, only for you We live an' learn from our mistakes |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You know I hear your call For just one true friend But I’m not the sapling Hearts break, not bend Loved the sweet sound of this.... but it still hurts a little~ Nicely done EagleOne~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gosh Eddie, that's a sad one there, friend hugs to you |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sweetie~ You make me feel~ *Huglets* to you~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
No one could call you fickle! A love tried, true--and blue. EA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
don't know what to say, but your thoughts are extremely well written! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"If it be my fate Then let me be blue But please don’t doubt This love I hold, only for you" This is just a precious write, dear Eddie ... sooo romantic. I just hope she truly brings you happiness and NOT the blues. Hugssssssss! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is a wonderful expression of love.I hoipe she brings you happiness and no sadness.Very well done here. angelblueyes |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eddie There always seems to be a sadness that comes with loving...and I sure could feel it in this poem. Hope all works out for you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Eddie.. Sad, yet so full of love.. Good to read you here today! ~Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Beautiful sentiments Eagle . . . extremely hard to find such endearment xxoo |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I believe Eddie, that if it is a true love, that once loved, always loved and despite what is cliche', time doesn't heal..it never lessens the pain nor lessens the love for another, it just allows you to go on. hugss M |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful yet sad Maree. fate is not just |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"You know I hear your call For just one true friend But I’m not the sapling Hearts break, not bend" INDEED! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
BluesSerenade ~ yes it does, just a little. Thank you! Passing shadows ~ sad was definitely the feeling. Marge ~ Feeling is what it’s all about. Earth Angel ~ I couldn’t put it any better. VAS ~ sometimes there is just nothing to be said, thank you. Janette ~ the happiness I think may be a matter of my perspective. Angelblueyes ~ Thank you! Martie ~ it would certainly seem that way. Nancy ~ Always good to have you read me, thank you! Littlewing ~ endearment seems a fitting term here. Vandana ~ enjoyed being read, thank you! Nakedthoughts ~ much truth in your wise words, thank you! Dark Angel ~ I was having one of my many sad moments, thank you. Kaoru ~ indeed it is sometimes the way of love. We live an' learn from our mistakes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hmm..this touches me very much right now...I've watched someone very dear to me going through the same thing; my brother...no one taught us how to love halfway...in loving we sometimes lose a lot...but love is worth the risk...and, well, sometimes we just have no say in what our hearts will do....  hugs, g "Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams |
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