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Water Marks
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Water Marks |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You follow me... In swims of colored water Tagging me in dips, Every touch a magical print To dive away, Silent stiller depths Sudden in your expert sleek Thrilling me in brushes rose I close my eyes and float You play upon the waves, Scattering your toys Dunking me when I'm not looking And rainbows come Spots inside my tightened lids Gulping water and flailing madly Marco and Polo in the same speech You are silver in the water A streak of lightning That warms my hand In full pass and gentle electrocution Always of your own Copyright Kkh 8/2/03 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD Water play, with a twist...loved it! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ThisDiamond~ I adored this ... and - 'Gulping water and flailing madly Marco and Polo in the same speech' -this brought memories rushing~ Thank you for being a poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond I like it, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Brilliant; a sparkling delight. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are silver in the water A streak of lightning That warms my hand In full pass and gentle electrocution Always of your own Aww, this is a beautiful splash of color TD~ Your writing never fails to leave a lasting impression! Very pretty... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
wonderful write n read,,,  |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This was wonderfully wet. angelblueyes |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow !! Aweseome write. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Your images are magical, TD. Just incredible. Still shaking my head at you in awe! Patricia |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
enjoyed  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-08-2003 09:11 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Loved it!!!  Susan |
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