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Open Poetry #28
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symphony_of_thoughts
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since 2003-08-03
Posts 95
Somewhere
0 posted 2003-08-08 10:48 PM

I tire out my mind
Restlessly wandering through no man's land
After awhile I can't find a single thought
My inspiration leaks like a draining pipe
Hurridely spilling onto the canvas
In no particular order it forms the image
In it's raw, unfinished glory
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Miah
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2003-08-08 11:11 PM

"My inspiration leaks like a draining pipe
Hurridely spilling onto the canvas"

Great poem!  and Welcome!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-08-09 01:40 AM

I liked your unfinished glory without a catch phrase.   Good for you!!

And welcome to the blue pages~
Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
3 posted 2003-08-09 01:53 AM

Frustrating isn't it?
Well, we all spill a lot of it here, so welcome to the club.

Kraw'
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