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Poet's Cry
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Poet's Cry |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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Poet’s Cry O’ muse, yield thou secrets, my fortunes untold Uncover his disguise, let his truths unfold Open my eyes... Thy naive poet child cries For I seen his black cloud abyss And wish delivery from wilderness From aimless walk, quotes of double talk, nonsense, pretense Once that I knew and caressed Held in my breast Words, unfaithful, untrue Now I call upon you O’ muse, Speak thou, all wisdoms echoed from chamber’s bed For blackest cloud spirit has left words unsaid Release thee now, my thoughts, my dreams to stage I cry out to you, to prepare this, my pen’s page ...Thanks for your tweaking, Karilea!... [This message has been edited by Patricia (08-08-2003 10:40 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Nice cadence to this one Patricia. Enjoyed the interesting presentation. Kept me moving right with the lyric. TD |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nicley penned,,, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wasn't much to do, Patricia... you had the poem in hand all along! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Patricia, hello and may I say this was wonderful, many moments are spent crying for our muse, but here your muse has helped all the way. Very much enjoyed, take care my friend and enjoy your muses callings. Sincerely Rick |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
And the Muse answered with your beauty. Great poem! Eric |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Patricia~ Isn't it nice to see those muses gainfully employed ?  Nice write~ Keep reaching ... the next one is only a fingertip away~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pat ~ Your muse must have snuck up on you when you weren't looking! Wonderful write!  Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If you ever find a way to make a muse answer pleas... tell us, please! LOL I liked this very much, Patricia! *S* |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
YOur muse doesn't have a problem as it flowed well here and always does my friend  I liked this.angelblueyes |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Surely the muse was a-mused and will never leave you wanting! Lovely! Love, Margherita |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Loved it! Susan |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Release thee now, my thoughts, my dreams to stage I cry out to you, to prepare this, my pen’s page Patricia, I'm glad you found your muse.  This is a very good write. Hugs  Ethel |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
to she who would beg the muse the words are in your pen awaiting freedom!  nice |
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