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Bent ( A Senyru)
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Bent ( A Senyru) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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sunshine behind you and raindrops in front create refraction of light |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is great just like the essence of your spirit.  angelblueyes |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
nice one.... and lets see,, a rainbow of thoughts. bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Your short poems never really need anything else. Nice piece. Im adding it. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
you are a slice of rainbow sunshine! Rf |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
 Very sweet, and heartfelt.  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-08-2003 02:04 PM).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
nice littlewink  |
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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada |
nice poem. short and sweet ~bjw~ ~To see the world in a grain of sand |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
nice i saw the title and expected something else..grin |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
angel - what a sweet thing to say - thank you Chris stop that! LOL thank you yep you got it Bernie thank you green - thank you - I am really bad at these, I have trouble making them flow so short Robert, God what a sweet thing to say to me - thank you so much! Thank you Shara - I love that butterfly! Thanks Barbara - they are hard to do short and sweet Thank you V! Raph, you mean an anatomical something else or a mental something else? *laughing* thank you (you know I have hard time writing these) LR - littlewink *smile* I love that - thank you Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (08-09-2003 09:38 AM).] |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
sweetly said |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
either or grins |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
This is great, Sue. We've all got to learn that without a little rain (or a little sun!) in our lives, we can't have a rainbow. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Bri . . . Raph . . .hmm . . . I am bending towards the either *laughing harder* < laughing at that! I need to go wake up . . . Thanks Dix! Ben - yes, how sweet . . . exactly! thank you Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (08-09-2003 09:37 AM).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
enjoyed the view well done!!! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sue, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, and I love that moment most of all when that rainbow shines through and reflects in the raindrops, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - and I'm in siloutte with your words... BC |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
you said you couldn't do theses, nice job. Jason |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sue, Wow! So much said in so few words...excellent! Susan C. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Love this much, dear Sue. Like Raph I was surprised at first ... Whatever, the result is LIFE in all its duality. Tears and joy hand in hand always. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Beautiful! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you VAS - good to see me reading me Thank you Noah . . . is good to see you back Bill . . . so so sweet to me always - thank you Jason, I cant - this sucks lol thank you . . . Susan, thank you - these are my weakness hard to write these - feel like I lose depth of emotion Thank you Margherita, yes surprised LOL because I shouldnt be attempting to write these LOL Ice! thank you so much Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (08-10-2003 12:51 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Beautiful contrasts tweets~ |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
ok little i joined and posted lol..... i like the feel of the place , thanks and the poem was visual in my mind ... luv it ... - wolfy |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Bluesy ! Hey Doc - nice to see you here - I have to go find you now . . . ehehehe thank you Thanks guys xxoo |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Susie, what everyone else said, beautiful and unexpected. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Wonderful write Sue! |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Some people use a lot of words and say nothing.A minimalist poet uses a few words and says every thing.Great senyru. paladin |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
--and refracted light can be a glorious sight!   EA |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
is it illusion or reality tho? very very nice and pretty |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks gem . . . I cant write these for **** lol Thank you Tima . . . Hey where have you been? paladin - that is the single most wonderful thing anyone could say to me - thank you Linda - yes yes indeed thank you Michele - your asking ME that question? LOL . . . thank you thanks guys xxoo |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
sue - the masterpoet omg this was awesome - I'm blown away I think it left me giddy in fact its going in my library this wasnt a senyru its a sueyru lmao it just filled my day with rainbows you should write more of these you seem to evoke alot of responses with them but then again being the duet queen??? nevermind you cant really do sueyru duets now can you lmao - Mike btw - is there anything you cant write |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Oooooh! You did this good |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Mike . . . you are so dead for writing that up there . . . funny guy thank you for bumping this I was hoping it was going to go away lol Meg - thank you so much . . . *blushes* I really have no business writing a senyru Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (08-12-2003 05:24 PM).] |
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