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Cosmic Enticement |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Cosmic Enticement Cosmic creature A special feature Falling down to me In my arms I want you to be Moonlight highlighting you hair Your sensual scent fills the air Stardust twinkling in your eyes With your caress my loneliness dies If only one night with you I could share Voicing a loud word I wouldn't dare As you fall from the sky in a flight so free I would hold you up high for all to see "Due to budget cuts, the light at the end of the tunnel, has been turned off" author unknown |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
nice rhythm, enjoyed  |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
I get it . . . You've been watching a "creature feature".  |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
i like your style , i can relate to this feeling , wow what a powerful surge love can wield , aujussy |
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Lexia Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 111Nowhere |
Wow, interesting piece. Love the rhythym. Nice work. Lexia You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Amature, this is beautiful. I especially like this part... Moonlight highlighting you hair Your sensual scent fills the air Stardust twinkling in your eyes With your caress my loneliness dies Hugs  Ethel |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wonderful! |
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