Open Poetry #28 |
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The Autumn Of My Life |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States ![]() |
The Autumn of My Life By Paul Wilson The old man looked upwards towards the changing sky while walking well worn path from mail box to front door The years have taken their toll on his frail body memories and pain are all that’s left, nothing more Eighty years of hard work, always giving his all never complaining about the bad times he had Too old to work anymore…his body broken his memory starting to fail…lonely and sad His wife is now gone…to her reward in Heaven as the sun now sets he touchesher rocking chair He remembers that day in May they got married she wore a dress of white with flowers in her hair The love they shared was so special in many ways sharing all the laughter, joy and even the pain Working side by side…always together each day in the fields… raising their crops and praying for rain They never had much when it came to wealth and things but they had each other to comfort every night Years have passed so quick, wondering where did they go he begins to talk to her like he does each night The wind begins to blow as darkness brings a chill from out of the North while he sits in their porch swing He hears a voice calling to him from far away we will be together soon… sharing everything He prepares nightly meal with memories and dreams from days gone by as leaves begin to fall from trees The time has come he says looking in the mirror at his reflection and the loniness he sees Lying in their bed tears fall from his eyes each night to the soft pillow where she use to lay her head Tonight will be different, he knows his time is near he says his final prayer…nothing more to be said "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (08-08-2003 07:43 PM).] |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Paul, this is a beautiful poem. I especially liked these last two verses.... The wind begins to blow as darkness brings a chill from out of the North while he sits in their porch swing He hears a voice calling to him from far away we will be together soon… sharing everything Lying in their bed tears fall from his eyes each night to the soft pillow where she use to lay her head Tonight will be different, he knows his time is near he says his final prayer…nothing more to be said Just beautiful.... ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Paul? This was so sad. It was beautifully written...just sad. Susan C. |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Paul, this brings tears..so touching and beautiful. Sandra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul...I know it is hard after a long cherished love, to be without that person...your poem poignantly paints the tenderness and pain. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paul, A sad but wonderful write. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paul~ At first read ... I felt the sad inking, then the beauty of knowing they'd soon meet again~ Nicely done, my friend~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Paul Your words touched the deepest part of my heart and were so beautifully written. I hope all is fine with you. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Ethel...Thanks dear lady for taking time to read and your lovely reply. Glad you liked it...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Susan...You are so right, losing your life mate is sad as you say, but they will always be together in their hearts. Thanks for the read and sweet reply...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (08-08-2003 08:02 PM).] |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sandra...Sorry about the tears, but glad that you liked this and took the time to read. This is just something that crossed my mind about my grandparents so I decided to write it. Thanks...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Martie...Thank you for caring and your touching reply.As they say true love never dies...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Seymour...Glad you think this was wonderful. Coming from a gifted poet as yourself I really appreciate it very much.Thanks...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...Your reply touches my heart and gives me the encouragement to continue to write and hopefully someday be as great as you and others here at Passions.Thanks very much...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue...I'm glad to have touched your heart, as so many of your poems touch mine. Thanks so much for taking time to read and your lovely reply...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
This is a truly beautiful poem. And it is amazing how words can make the tears flow freely! thankyou for this poem. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Paul - the first thing I felt when reading this was how beautiful yet sad it is. This is excellent my friend, just excellent... BC |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
You might have written this for my Grandfather . . . Thanks for sharing. Kraw' |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Paul, only a kind, compassionate, and seeing man could write as you have just done. This really moved me... ![]() Linda |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
gringakiwi...Your thoughtful reply brings a smile to my face.Thank you very much for allowing me to touch you in some way...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Bill... Thank you sir for understanding. I really appreciate you taking time from your busy schedule to read and honor me with that wonderful reply...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Krawdad...Perhaps I did write it for all of our grandfathers. They all had such a struggle in life, so that our parents and us could have it a little easier. I really thank you for reading and your touching reply...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Linda...I am so glad that you enjoyed this. Your words are just too nice, after all I'm still trying to learn from people such as you. Thanks for allowing me to share this with you...Paul Everytime I see your name I remember that real long poem you wrote about Atlantis and teaching the world what to do. That to me is how I hope to write someday. Take Care...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my Paul... ![]() I hate anyone being alone, just waiting |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
The wind begins to blow as darkness brings a chill from out of the North while he sits in their porch swing He hears a voice calling to him from far away we will be together soon… sharing everything so touching loved ones always reside in heart |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
passing shadows...I hope it didn't make you too sad. Thanks for your sweet reply and for taking time to read...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (08-12-2003 08:01 PM).] |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
ambrish...I'm so glad that you liked this poem. Thanks very much for reading and your touching reply...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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