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Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-08-07 06:56 PM

I do not sleep
much
I lie awake
and think for hours
about how you
hold me
responsable
for the actions
of a child
while the adult
can't believe it
himself

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

1 posted 2003-08-07 07:01 PM

Great expression.

barbaraj
Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 139
Nova Scotia, Canada

2 posted 2003-08-07 07:29 PM

i liked this..very expressive

~bjw~

~To see the world in a grain of sand
And heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand
And eternity in an hour.--> Blake~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-08-07 08:02 PM

brilliant jason

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-08-07 09:33 PM

Jason, quit reading my mind already . . .
you still have that write?
yes, I know this one too
xxoo

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

5 posted 2003-08-07 09:39 PM

thanks friends, yes Sue, I still have the write, told you i was slow.I will pick up the pace.

Jason

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-08-08 06:57 AM

too much self torture
stop
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-08-08 11:56 AM

No, thats fine . . . you know where I am

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

8 posted 2003-08-08 11:59 AM

This was good.I feel the emotion in this.
angelblueyes

eminor_angel
Member

since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

9 posted 2003-08-08 12:22 PM

great write. simple but complex, the best way.

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

10 posted 2003-08-08 02:43 PM

always seems like somebody else later don't it? been there... (back pat)

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

11 posted 2003-08-09 01:53 AM

I am just going to nod my head
in understanding here

simple
powerful

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

12 posted 2003-08-09 04:10 PM

Thank you friends, for the read and time took to comment.

Jason

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