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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Classic poems are Preserved cadavers, Dead until read They lie in state, In closed tomes. * God like, I resurrect; Gray matter Of my mind, Breathing life back into them; Finger tips turning the rock from the cave. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Exceptional write! Those classicals wait for people like you, to breathe again and to share their beauty. Love, Margherita  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ice Some times the weight of words is a big responsibility....holding the poet accountable for poetry. I enjoyed this and the thoughts it brought to me...thank you. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
*applauds* I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ice? this is brilliant! Sorry I missed your entrance Welcome to PIP! xxoo |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ice~ 'Dead until read' Oh, how very, very true~ Here's breathing new life into yours~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Excellent write, especially the ending: "Finger tips turning the rock from the cave." wow. ~K~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Margherita Thank you..:-) Perhaps if the classics were shown and discussed in grade schools, we would have more people in our society that would see the real beauty in them as adults. ********************** Martie I am glad you enjoyed the poem..:-) It is the "weight" of words that make a poem great....In the classic poems you can find feathers or lead....whatever you can carry the day you open the anthology is there... ************************ Snowflake Thank you, I bow to your applause.... Good quote from the song.... ************************* Littlewing I may have posted this in the wrong forum, I have several poems on #27 but I think it was full when I posted this? Thank you for the nice comment...:-) ************************** Marge Thank you for reading and commenting.:-) I like the quote, it is true.... *************************** Kahlil Thank you..:-) That line gave me the most problem in this write....Glad you like it.....:-) ****************************** Again, Thank you all for your comments..........ice |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I love it. Reading it again makes it sound even more vibrant then the first time. :-) Ribbit |
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