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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-08-06 11:50 PM


the rain is falling down
like the tears down your cheek
i'm sorry i hurt you
i'm sorry i broke you
i didnt mean to
i wanted you to be mine forever
i wanted to keep you
but i cant
your like a beautifull bird
you just can't keep it caged
that's all i would be doing
trying to prevent the inevitable
i can't keep lying to myself
and keep saying your all mine
and always will be
because i know thats not true
i have to set you free
so that you can fly away...

so kiss me hard caise this will be the last time that i let you...-D.C



[This message has been edited by exhale (08-06-2003 11:58 PM).]

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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
1 posted 2003-08-06 11:57 PM


so sad but beautiful sometimes it's very hard letting go.
angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
2 posted 2003-08-07 12:47 PM


Sometimes letting go isn't easy, but if it's meant to be they will fly back to you.
angelblueyes

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-08-08 03:22 AM


yes, birds were meant to fly free . . . indeed . . .
God, I felt this one tonight
xxoo

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
4 posted 2003-09-14 10:31 AM


One of the hardest, but most important things to remember in Love; We can not cage Love, can not cage those that we love...

Back to that old saying..."If you love something, set it free....If comes back to you it's yours,  If doesn't it never was..."

enjoyed..
hugs, g

"Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..."  B. Adams

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
5 posted 2003-09-14 10:38 AM


I guess, because of a personal exp. in my own life when I read ones like this I always find myself wondering if the person has ever told the other that's how they feel. I feel that every time. WOW...you really bring that
emotion to the forefront for me. Wishing you

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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