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Open Poetry #28

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-09-20 11:29 PM

The allure of you
comes with the wind's mystery,

though you've sank so deep
into my soul,

this hunger still ravishes
thru dreamfilled nights,

turning into the face of dawn
and another day without you,

the sad paradox,

that upon
your much desired capture,

i would probaly let you go,
free to ride the wind again,

as i'd be soon enchanted
by the elusiveness of another.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-20-2003 11:31 PM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-20 11:34 PM

fabulous,,,

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-09-20 11:46 PM

brilliant mish

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-09-21 09:30 AM

ahh Michele, ICK sorry
beautiful writing
as always
xxoo

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-09-21 11:28 AM

Michele~

Yep..I have done just this...

I think it is because I want what I can't have so I try to settle and it never works..

But what do I know?

I enjoyed this very much.

Susan

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2003-09-21 08:02 PM

inkedgoddess - sounds like a special one out there. Nice write of thoughts...

BC

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

6 posted 2003-09-22 11:59 AM

This is amazing.

Crystal

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