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LukeatNFFC Junior Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 42Nottingham, England |
Rain- Inevitable cylinders, Drifting to the ground, Idioms of darkness, Creep without a sound. Silent and subtle, Into mother earth, Unrecognisable, For what they are worh. Distant rain, Always coming, From beatiful silence, Everything running. Why does it say Junior Member...? I'm 15 for God's sake!!!! |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
uhhh it says junior member because you're new still and I think after you hit 100 posts or something you're senior...but love the poem... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-20-2003 05:31 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It says "junior member" because you are quite young here at Passions, Luke. Keep posting, responding...the numbers will grow, and so will your status! Nice Poem! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You just keep writing and we'll keep on reading, Luke - This is a wonderful poem - It's beautifully written with lots of great imagery incorporated - I enjoyed, and I'll be looking forward to reading lots more of your work...  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love rain--and your poem!  Wonderful write! Peace & Light, EA |
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