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Open Poetry #28
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RunningWolf
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since 2003-09-14
Posts 24
Michigan USA
0 posted 2003-09-19 08:18 PM


Someone call the editor   (doctor)
Im having a word attack! (heart attack)
Gotta go through sergery
to remove this ink clot   (blood clot)
Ink thinners arent doin' it for me. (blood thinners)
sure hope i dont need
a word transplant           (heart transplant)
The doc says i need a new page maker  (pace maker)
but i dont know why.
he tells me i also need
a spell checker.
He's losin ink!           (blood)
I hear a sergion shouting.
The nurse came in wearing a
cloak and carrying a psythe.
She pulled off the hood and
said "hey wake up your dreaming."
why dont you go and get another
cup of coffee.
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angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-09-19 08:22 PM

I have to say this is a different insight, but the way you turned it is a unique penning.
Crystal
garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
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2 posted 2003-09-20 12:36 PM

Yes, I agree with Crystal, this is a very
unique penning.  
Hugs  
Ethel
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